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Monday, May 17, 2010
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I guess we comment here, instead of on the blog, for constructive criticism? I don't really have a feel for how this all works yet...
ReplyDeleteMy feedback is- it's hard to read when there are so many grammatical/punctuation errors. I know we aren't in English class and I really like what you have to say but, it's hard to read. I think you shared a really nice moment with your vulnerability re: raising preemies but I had to re-read sentences several times in order to follow the train of thought...
That's my 2 cents.
I love Just Being Another Mom's story. I follow along even before this, and it's amazing how much of a strong woman she is even with everything she's going though. I think blogs are better when there's a unique story to tell.
ReplyDeleteI understand the grammatically correct comment. I'm pretty bad in the spelling department myself and have had to edit posts because things like run-ons. I found that using Chrome as my browser helps with catching a lot of the spelling mistakes, as it has a spell checker built in. Firefox does as well, but I sometimes have issues with it when I'm typing (for example, when I hit enter, it doesn't automatically take me to the next line). Hope that helps =)
Please don't feature this lady or this blog. She is a scam and is not pregnant at all.
ReplyDelete1. She (for sure) posted on FB that Caleb is only a carrier of Galactoscemia (sp), when she has been telling us all along that he actually HAS the disease.
2. She has a blog dedicated to Caleb and his "struggle" with the disease. (see above).
3. The long post about how her family was pressuring her about starting a business- According to FB she HAS a business anyway and is looking for clients. She has hours and phone numbers posted and people asking how much she charges.
4. At the same time she made that long post, she posted a FB status saying how wonderful her family is and how supportive they are of her.
5. Many ladies on Multiples have been very suspicious of her since day 1.
6. The mag drip she is supposedly on right now....I don't know anything about it but you can see in previous threads. ALL of the ladies who commented on it said that it all but leaves you paralized. She could not have typed that email to Sahara if she were on it.
7. There were discrepencies between her siggy ticker and two of her blogs about when the "twins" are due.
8. Also discrepencies about when Calebs "twin" was miscarried. Apperently the date of the miscarriage that she had was the same date of Caleb's birth, when she had said it was earlier on in the pregnancy.
9. The blog post about the fact that she will not be having Maternity photos done. Because "she had them done with DD and right afterwards they were in a car accident" so she felt that the photos jinxed her.
10. Every time one of us posted on her FB about twims of her pregnancy, it was deleted very shortly after. She says this was bbecause she wasn't out about it to FB yet, but at 20 weeks along, it would be very obvious that she was pregnant, expecially with twins.
11. Deleting all of us from FB (minor, but raises a concern)
12. When I was planning the DC gtg, she was so eager to help. When I had to back out, she took over. Last minute, Caleb was in the hospital and she couldn't make it. (she had also bailed on a previous GTG last minute). I think her stepping up to help was part of her plan to get attention. ALSO, absolutely NO mention of that particular hospital visit on FB. (she normally posted about stuff like that, unrelated to the disease).
I'm almost positive I am forgetting some.....If anyone wants to add to this feel free. Once again, dont point to me as the bad guy, I am simply passing on the information that I know because people have been asking.
ETA: she also NEVER once mentioned on FB anything about having those two blogs that she has.